Well first of all I kinda didn't notice it was a chick until you said so. A lot of her features like the neck are more geared toward a man's proportions like the adam's apple you drew on her neck.
ill upload a drawing of a dude so you can see the difference, as for the neck, i used this as reference:
Also keep the line on the right that goes in the V but get rid of the one on the left and don't make it so long.
i dont get this, i mean i do but i dont at the same time, please elaborate?
Also for the hair the hair at the top left seems to be all going in one direction which is fine, but I think you might have made it slightly a little to tall on the left side or too short on the right.
youre right, it looked normal to me since her heads tilted to the side
It should show an outline of a circle at some point whether there's hair going everywhere or not.
i dont get this either sorry. =/
Good job on your drawing, I really like the detail and don't take my critique as a harsh thing but more like a comment that you should consider and take if you think it will help you.
thnx for the input, im shooting for a more realistic art style, maybe thats why i put too much detail than i should have. but then again once i upload a male portrait then youll see the difference between the two. thanks again.