I'll tell you this right now; it's very hard to read. he most important thing about a logo with text is readability. How can you tell people about your product if they can tell what it's called?
the symbol is OK, but i would want something a little wider so it doesn't look like "Whispered" is off on its own. As for the Asian text, Are you releasing this in an Asian language of some sort? If not, that is a bad thing to put on there. It might fare better if your game is set in Asia.
A minor note, it's better to do logos in a vector-based program like Illustrator, instead of a raster-based like Photoshop. However, if you absolutely need to make it in Photoshop or a similar program, keep your master at a massive size and re-size a copy as needed.
Well, it wont be as hard to read on the title picture as it is on the white background in the forum.
And i just like the japanese there, im not going to release a japanese version, but those arent random characters, its the name of the game in japanese.
About the wider symbol, i'll try to find a better one, but this is my problem, i never find any symbols that fit, so it might take a while to find..
I find many but can never make up my mind about the right one..