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bacon
  Thu Jul 21, 2011 10:31 pm
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I never changed the contrast from when you said it looked fine x:

but yeah, I guess Ill tweak with it and see what i can do.


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bacon
  Fri Jul 22, 2011 11:55 am
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its part of my mini portfolio i am doing to recruit a scripter/coder~

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Amy
  Fri Jul 22, 2011 12:04 pm
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Dude, half of these are totally going on my wall as posters. Between you and Wumpi there's some two greatly unique styles on this board.

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bacon
  Fri Jul 22, 2011 6:07 pm
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thanks wyatt
im sure wumpi would appreciate that as well
because i know i do c:

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dadevvtsvre
  Fri Jul 22, 2011 7:24 pm
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They're still really dark. The bark on the tree fades too easily into the background. On a dark monitor they're virtually indistinguishable.

I like the whole tone/feel you're shooting for though! They're very simplistic but that's definitely not a bad thing.


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bacon
  Sat Jul 23, 2011 7:22 am
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oh dear what do you mean still
x:

tbh i dont really know what to do
and this is becoming especially tedious x:

I mean i am trying to keep cool, dark colors because, well thats sort of the theme.
But at the same time, I cant really brighten them up because then the contrast with the foreground would be sort of ruined and then players will think that the background is part of the foreground

so basically i dont even know what to do anymore :c

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dadevvtsvre
  Sat Jul 23, 2011 7:49 am
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You can increase the contrast in the trees without your players thinking that they're part of the foreground. The main issue is between the tree and the leaves in front, and the background. They don't pop nearly enough. Distinguish your colours - maybe a colour wheel would help? - and it will look so much better.

The platforms should be the things that pop the most, so put a particular emphasis on making them stand out.

I mean, yeah, it's one thing to have dark, subdued colours as a theme. But when everything looks the exact same, it gets monotonous and boring, which is why you need to have a few elements contrasting to make them stand out.


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bacon
  Mon Jul 25, 2011 1:39 am
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yeah I was going to have torches and lamps and hanging foreground stuff like flowers I am just trying to do basic shit
Im going to play around with the colors in the next piece and see if it turns out better~

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bacon
  Fri Jul 29, 2011 8:11 am
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peri forced me to do an anime
i didnt want to but she threatened to kill my family
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Perihelion
  Fri Jul 29, 2011 7:35 pm
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hehehehehehehehehehehheh

If I have to do it, so do you!


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bacon
  Tue Aug 02, 2011 8:15 am
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cutie pie sailor monster

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bacon
  Thu Aug 04, 2011 10:18 am
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its a little simple
working on boss concepts and ideas
I really wanted the boss to clash
coloring is super sloppy

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I posted this in sketch but
Im not going to finish it
its hard to pick up a piece you havent touched in 2 days
so im just going to stick this here~

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bacon
  Tue Aug 23, 2011 9:09 am
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i posted this in sketch but
now its done so now im posting it here
I just did some simple coloring to make it looks somewhat like the original source~
oh dear now i am doing fanarts
somebody save me
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bacon
  Thu Aug 25, 2011 6:57 am
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its a sketch but
im not too happy with the lady's face
i was trying to make it look unexpressive but it just looks weird
oh well~

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Amy
  Thu Aug 25, 2011 3:13 pm
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bacon wrote:
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I posted this in sketch but
Im not going to finish it
its hard to pick up a piece you havent touched in 2 days
so im just going to stick this here~

my friend it is already finished~

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bacon
  Sat Aug 27, 2011 6:35 am
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oh dear x:

so like
this is my first attempt of actually taking the time and coloring something
and oh dear
it is pretty terrible but i gotta start somewhere and this is my start~
its a little pillowshaded and
im not super happy with the lightsouce~

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its sloppy too

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Vergessen
  Sat Aug 27, 2011 6:52 am
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very nice bacon! i wish i had free time since i hear you have been looking for a programmer/scripter

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bacon
  Sat Aug 27, 2011 6:54 am
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very nice bacon! i wish i had free time since i hear you have been looking for a programmer/scripter


i said that but then i decided i wasnt a good enough artist to do art for a game so I am learning how to draw more before i seriously attempt it

once I learn how to color and shade a lot, lot better I will actually try to make a game oh dear~

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Vergessen
  Sat Aug 27, 2011 6:56 am
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rofl, that gives me time for work to slow down(FMJ LOL) remember me when you get better ;)

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bacon
  Sat Aug 27, 2011 6:59 am
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sure thing
thanks~

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Vergessen
  Sat Aug 27, 2011 7:03 am
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i just realized i still have my joke name, im normally plague180

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bacon
  Tue Aug 30, 2011 9:40 am
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eh~
i gotta finish it so its still rough~

i seriously struggle with every pose so this is practice
practice posing~

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bacon
  Sat Sep 03, 2011 2:12 am
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oh dear

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5 color challenge oh no~

i need to stop doing the same thing x:
because I seriously am
Ive been basically touching up so there isnt tons of improvement happening right now just small things

hopefully my next big art stride will happen next month or so

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dadevvtsvre
  Sat Sep 03, 2011 2:32 am
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yeah, don't let yourself fall into a comfort zone of drawing "creepy pupil-less girls" all the time. i believe in you, bacon. expand your horizons, and show the world what you're made of :cheers:


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bacon
  Sat Sep 03, 2011 2:39 am
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i know
I totally realize that
ive been basically just constricting and refining and trying to solidify things
which sounds super silly but
I have a really hard time with keeping consistent
so thats something I am seriously working on
and my gesture
because I am also so terrible at gesture
but by doing comfort things its pretty easy to work on gesture
and I have gotten better in the last week so yay~

Ive been playing around with body parts
how to shape them and how to move them
and how to define them
Ive been trying to extend and de-extend things so that i can maybe make things without a human proportion and make them look normal

but yeah hopefully I have my next art stride in the next upcoming month
i tend to switch off between comfort zone and then strides

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bacon
  Tue Sep 06, 2011 10:34 am
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WIP background
working on painting and colors

a lot of stuff is missing like grass and vines and details
and I gotta play around with the contrast

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bacon
  Mon Sep 12, 2011 5:43 am
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they said I couldnt do males
I proved them right~

the final version is cleaned up with the lineart im just too lazy to resize it x:

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bacon
  Wed Sep 21, 2011 5:18 am
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at least i am trying to expand my horizons~
its pretty bleh in terms of shading
but shading isnt my strongsuit x:

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bacon
  Wed Sep 21, 2011 7:26 am
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ugh
gotta clean it and shit and add more detail and texture but i guess its an okay start x:

what i am really proud of is that for the first time in history bacon actually removed his lineart
yeah
there is no lineart in that
cool shit
super cool
so cool
just
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  Wed Sep 21, 2011 10:25 am
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that is pretty cool
a little bit dark too, try adding some bright shades of green, or some highlights somewhere

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