That's actually really nice, bacon! I think your problem with the background is that it's flat, so it looks out of place with the insect. You need to paint the background too if you want it to blend in.
As far as coloring advice goes, I think you need to consider the overall dimensionality of the thing more. Before you paint, maybe block in the light and dark areas roughly so it's easier to keep the overall form in mind.
yeah I know what you are saying peri. Lighting and shading have always been a super struggle and its always been super hard for me to imagine a 3D perspective. Its something I am working on and hopefully am getting better with over time.
The background is terrible I just got so tired of the piece that I sort of stopped
Thanks miss peri ma'am
Also Badmonur gave me some tips hopefully with some practice I can get good~
I also got an anatomy book so like
hopefully I go full fledged with learning the human body and stuff
combine this with learning how to paint digitally and hopefully my art will get better~
(and I will restart that comic~)