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    Arjunsp
  Mon Sep 29, 2008 5:26 pm
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Dragons and Warriors - The Beginning.

A story of an ancient prophecy.

Story


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Screens


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Demo

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    Arjunsp
  Mon Sep 29, 2008 5:34 pm
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I'm putting the demo on megaupload now.

EDIT: I have uploaded the demo. http://www.megaupload.com/?d=FQBVVF33 It's also in the first post.

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    Arjunsp
  Mon Sep 29, 2008 9:00 pm
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Nobody wants to comment on my game?  :down: :sad:

Come now, it's been less than four hours since you posted this! Cool your jets, slick.
Uwe Boll

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    Dewoor
  Mon Sep 29, 2008 9:04 pm
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I will try it tomorrow, I swear, but it's gettin late here  :thumb:

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    Dark_linis
  Mon Sep 29, 2008 9:25 pm
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Well your story isn't interesting.

Is there any more depth than that?

the bush slashing looks really ugly. You could have made the sprite move also instead of a random telepathic invisible blade doing the work.

"Moldova*
Moldova is a really tough warrior who likes to only wear big blocks of armour. Moldova is your friend, but sometimes he doesn't trust you and at every opportunity he TRIES to get away from you, but Ace wants him to be friends with you so he never lets Moldova leave you."

Wtf?! what a horrible friend!

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    Arjunsp
  Tue Sep 30, 2008 4:24 pm
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It's my first game (I promised not to keep saying that) and I'm not really bright on the ideas... I'll try and improve it sometime.

I made the bush cutting with events and I couldn't find any sprites that looked like they were slashing a sword, If you can find me one that would be nice.

I meant to say that Moldova isn't really your friend...


EDIT: What did anyone think of the CBS that I found?

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    Dewoor
  Tue Sep 30, 2008 5:08 pm
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I don't really like these CBS-es in rmxp or vx. In old FF, they were awesome, but in these games, they just don't look good. (With these tiny walk-sprites and this HUGE background, at least)

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    Arjunsp
  Tue Sep 30, 2008 8:13 pm
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I guess I posted this game too early, there are still LOTS of things to improve on... I might re-post this game when I'm finished with it, until then I've officially abandoned this thread.

So quick wasn't it...

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    jondeate
  Mon Jun 29, 2009 5:12 am
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Not so interesting


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    dadevvtsvre
  Mon Jun 29, 2009 5:19 am
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Please check the dates before you post, jondeate-the last post was nearly a year ago. If the last post was over a month ago, it's considered a necropost.

If you have some good content to add to the thread then it's usually allowed, but you didn't need to revive this topic to post three words.


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    Marc1k1
  Tue Jun 30, 2009 11:48 am
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Arjunsp wrote:
Nobody wants to comment on my game?  :down: :sad:

Come now, it's been less than four hours since you posted this! Cool your jets, slick.
Uwe Boll


The story is cliche but instead of being an ass-hole and just saying that I'll try to help with that as much as possible, Ok the first thing is the story may be cliche but its fine it will do to be hounest, Hell is FF games can continuesly be about four crystals why not this?, Give the world and the KING definet and easy to attain in the game explanation about the history of the place, try to make it intressting with lots of twists and turns I would advise visiting the Elder Scrolls Wiki and look at the TES time line... ITS WACKY AS ALL HELL also emperors/emperese die like ... alot! in their timelines consider this for the game, The dragon that could be worked on but you dont have to make it show up so much in the game build some suspence on the dragon give it an aura of evilness with characters descriptions with a dragon that isn't very difficult.

The characters are fine but remember whilst making the game GIVE THEM RELISTIC ATTITUDES, Dispite their apperance they must seem as real as possible to get people hooked in but try not to over do it also if your thinking of adding anouther character Add a character who is rival to the player its your choice how the game changes with that character, The rival can either be a complete Ass-hole to the player or he can be a team mate rival for example... erm... a Sonic the Hedgehog example would be Knuckles.... ... .. erm if you watch naruto then a good example would be Sasuke (before he runs away from leaf village and becomes a dick...)

you get the idea...

I'd abreviate more but... I gotta go

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Damn! shows me for not reading posts, a year old eh?

I think the people who posted before kinda crushed the dudes spirit a tad...
Oh well.

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