Hi ! This is Ameth I that I have worked with a half year ! Most important is that it has tons of sidequests !



Story of Ameth I :

There was a world called Ameth. The world was controlled by The World Government including the three organizations or parties Tekka Tora, Mirasol Organization and MaqaBar Faction. The leading organization was Tekka Tora who also had written all laws in The Book of Laws. One day when MaqaBar Faction of The World Govenment got a new leader, the organization where dismissed from The World Government as soon as Tekka Tora understud how dangerous he was. The reason to this was that Zarx was to powerhungry and wanted to be a dictator.

When they were dismissed Zarx wanted revenge at The World Government and therefore he and his organization started to create war machines in their enterprise, machines who should fight to take the entire World Government for Zarx. MaqaBar Faction was the best company in the world in building machines, cause they have built machines made for support and help many times before to citizens of Ameth.

At the same time as MaqaBar created machines, Zarx found an empty statue that a soul had been blown into, he accompanied it and this was when the statue, who was Nova Angel, gave Zarx his Data-darkness. And later, Zarx was in his castle with his secret helper Nova Angel and summoned dark spirits with his darkness he had obtained from her.

The highest members of Mirasol Organization was sent out from the World Government, they were one of the three organizations.Their mission is to go to the imperial city of Argahan Lehin and talk to King Pihra. Often Kings or dictators rules smaller countries while World Government rules the world. King Pihra was once a member of Midham Consil and therefore he has the right to summon Midham Empire to fight in the Machine War...So Mirasol must ask King Pihra to summon Midham Empire to fight with them against MaqaBar Faction. Zarx was in his castle summoning shadow grinders. His secret helper, Nova Angel, who gave him his data-darkness, drew Red Materia from cosmos, to use in The War. It was a particle from Cosmos that often grew within planets. The Red Materia was also called Crimson Dust, and with it she and Zarx should be very powerful.

In the Machine War, it would be the army of Tekka Tora and The Midham Empire who was summoned by King Pihra with the help of Mirasol. 3 young warriors were given the quest to find The God Crystals and draw their powers to defeat Zarx and his darkness and stop him from getting The World Government. With them they will have Aeons : The Millenium Children, who will guide them to The God Crystals...


Ameth I trailer : take a look :  http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sH5ZK9GQ6wk

Ameth I NEW trailer : (OBS Version 1.0 still) : http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QU5aObCcQL8
(Be Aware to that the trailer is of Version 1.0 and therefore the maps etc. is NOT updated)

NEW : Download Ameth I 1.1 (MI) : http://files.filefront.com/Ameth+Iexe/;13379965;/fileinfo.html

NEW : Download some of my other games : http://hosted.filefront.com/RPGS

My Homepage   : http://www.123minsida.se/Robinjorgen    
(I`m Swedish, so not everything may be in English even if much are)  


Characters

Ferrair -A young boy who lives in Amaril City who lost his mother in a ancient war...One day he found the Ice Crystal by a misstake and become a Warrior of Light. When his mother died his stepmother Kal-Zehir who took care of him, but since she was very mean, Ferrair escaped from her and she did never find him again and therefore she begun to live in Rokia Cliffs.

CLASS : Warrior AGE : 15 STARTING LV : 1
Relations : Sivill, Optikum : Ferrair´s Friend, Kahl-Zehir, Ferrair´s stepmother, Oracle Furnu : He went to her in Amaril City when he lost his parents in the war. He went there to see if he ever should feel happiness again, Axyr : He stole something from Ferrair of great importance to him and therefore he searched Axyr in The Data World.

Sivill - Ferrair`s dear friend who lives close to him in Amaril City. When she knew the chaos of the world, she accompanied Ferrair to find The God Crystals. She knows Bagastoss in Amaril City and it is her uncle. He became a friend with Ferrair and Optikum. She has high knowledge in magics and especially in ancient Materia. She has often to stop Optikum and Ferrair when they´re fighting over the most ridicolous things.

CLASS : Mage AGE : 16 STARTING LV : 1
Relations : Ferrair, Optikum, Sivill´s friends, Bagastoss, The friend of her mother, Groww : her private teacher that her parents piad for that is now even a friend to Sivill.

Optikum - An older friend to Ferrair, who used to watch over Ferrair...The dark shadow Axyr took him to Zarx`s castle to employ him at MaqaBar Enterprise, but he escaped. Axyr was once a part of his mind but he lost controlling Optikum when a unknown light banished him away back to Zarx´s Castle.

CLASS : Illusionist AGE : 19 STARTING LV : 7
Relations : Ferrair, the lonely boy who Optikum watched over, Sivill, Ferrair´s childhood friend, Axyr : The one who controlled his mind a long time and the dark side of Optikum.

Zarx - When he and his organization was dismissed from World Government, he wanted to take revenge against them and therefore he craved his organization to build war machines...With them they should kill all organizations and take over World Government theirselves...When he found a statue blowned life into, it gave him the data-darkness and Zarx got the ability of creating shadows. In his revenge he is also seeking the divine powers of The God Crystals.

AGE : ???? BOSS : Yes
Relations : Axyr, Mitsmith, Cynnak : The first Shadow Grinders created with his data-darkness, Nova Angel : The statue he found that had obtained a soul. She gave Zarx his data darkness, MaqaBar Faction.


Nova Angel - She gave Zarx his data-darkness and helps him in his revenge. She pretend to help Zarx but does truly not work for him, as she betrays him later in the game.Her greatest desire is to see the world devoid of all life so that she and her master can create a new planet out from the dark dephs.A world filled with the powers of Ameth`s crystals.

RACE : Statue/Angel BOSS : Yes
Relations : Zarx : Who found her, Thigmir : who fought her and her master for thousand of years ago in a war for the power of the ancients. Thigmir sought to destroy The DarkLight Crystal who threatened Ameth, Millenium Children : The Guides of The God Crystals that Nova Angel locked in for thousand of years ago in Ther´Ungul Valley. She interupted them in their quest millions of years since both her and Millenium Children have eternal life.

MaqaBar Faction - The organization who supports people with daily working machines doing people`s business and jobs.As Zarx became their leader, they were dismissed and swore to take revenge.

Members of MaqaBar Faction :


Kahl-Zehir - The nasty stepmother of Ferrair who have learnt to become a lunar. She lurks inside the pertrified woods of Rokia and works with vodoo magic of ancients. Because of that she was very mean to little Ferrair when she took care of him since his mother died, Ferrair escaped his horrible stepmother. Kahl-Zehir is also a long time friend to Roaki, The leader of Mirasol, but Roaki wanted trully to forget her.

AGE : 47 BOSS : Yes
Relations : Ferrair : Once Ferrair´s parents died, Ferrair´s stepmother Kahl-Zehir became the one to take care of Ferrair. But it seemed that she became very mean to him, Dentha : Kahl-Zehir was friend to Mirasol and first of all to Dentha of the organization, but he wishes trully to forget the horrible Kahl-Zehir that was his childhood friend.

Millenium Children - To find all God Crystals and defeat Zarx and his darkness, The Warriors of Light need guides.Therefore they travels to Tehr´Ungul Valley to find Millenium Children, the guides of the God Crystals.Nova Angel tries to defeat thoose children so The Warriors of Light doesn´t find The God Crystals so that Nova Angel can destroy them.

RACES : Angels (Guides of The God Crystals) Number : 7 Angels
Relations : Nova Angel : Who hindered them to fullfill their quest to guide Warriors of Light to The God Crystals,
Mirasol Organization : The Organizaton who released Salyonn, one of the guides, from The Sealed Crystal that one of Zarx´s workers had locked her within, Spiral of Death : A thing that kills The Millenium Children each thousand year and borns 7 new Millenium Children gudies. It is a thing that Nova Angel started with her Red Materia.

Axyr - The one who kidnapped Optikum. He is said to be Zarx`s most loyal shadow grinder.Once he took over Optikum´s mind and that´s one of the reasons why Optikum have fought his friend Ferrair, but they are fighting like brothers do.

RACE : Shadow Grinder BOSS : Yes
Relations : Optikum : He controlled Optikum´s mind with the power of darkness obtained from his creator, Zarx,
Zarx : The Creator of all Shadow Grinders and the mighty leader of MaqaBar Faction who will use machines and data-darkness to take revenge against The World Government.

Consul Xartix - Owner of the mighty god weapon Ri`Khan Sword.He fought the ancient Eldern Wyrm and it stole the sword and locked it away in hell fire abyss.

AGE : 27 BOSS : Yes
Relations : Eldern Wyrm : the ancient wyrm who took Ri´Khan Sword into the Hellfire Abyss and tried to use it to be king within the abyss, Wind God : the Wind God gave him the divine weapon Ri´khan Sword so he could fight the powers of darkness that threatened the kingdoms. Consul Xartix is of strange divine powers himself.

Roaki - She is the leader of Mirasol Organization who went to The Imperial Skycity of Argahan Lehin to ask King Pihra to summon The Midham Empire to fight in The Machine War. She is somehow a person with good self-mastery and is beloved as a leader.

CLASS : Illusionist AGE : 21 STARTING LV : 10
Relations : Kahl-Zehir : The childhood frind that she and her Mirasol friends want to forget, World Over Consul : The leader of Tekka Tora and the top of The World Government. She knows him as Mirasol and Tekka Tora works very closely, Judge XIII : The Lawminister XIII of House of Order, he arbites the primary laws and works with Roaki who is at the top of Mirasol Organization.

Dentha - The member 97 of Mirasol Organization and also the best fighter of The World Government. He has the special power of using the powers of undeads, however he cannot summon undeads. It is said that he obtained the ability when he came in contact with a strange network system in the laboratory of Tekka Tora.

CLASS : Death Knight AGE : 36 STARTING LV : 11
Relations : World Over Consul, Judge XIII, Member XXVI Tionn, members of Mirasol in House of Order.

Tionn - She is a Elemental within Mirasol and has always wanted to ride a dragon from the Thoron Volcanos. It is her greatest desire.

CLASS : Elemental AGE : 16 STARTING LV : 9
Relations : Judge XIII, Judge VIII Judge XXVI : Law Magisters of House of Order, Tionn is The Judge XXVI, member XXVI of House of Order and works closely to Judge XIII, King Pihra : She knows King Pihra and asks him to summon the Midham Empire to The Machine War, as King Pihra once was a member of The Midham Court.


King Pihra - He is the king of Argahan Lehin, the Imperial Skycity and is called by Mirasol to summon the Midham Empire to fight in the Machine War. Therefore he follows Mirasol to Metropolis Midham.

CLASS : Mage AGE : 56 STARTING LV : 15
Relations : Roaki : To fight in the Machine War, King Pihra ws summoned by Mirasol´s leader Roaki, Midham Emperor : the leader of the Hi-Tech city metropolis Midham.

History of The World Government :

Here are some screenshots of Ameth I : (Please be aware that the pictures is from version 1.0 ! And therefore the UPDATED maps of updated version(s) may look better)

SCREENSHOOTS OF THE UPDATED version(s) :




Optional (not all) :

Monster Arena (Includes 9 optional mega bosses)
Dom´Berghis (Includes 1 secret boss and the Dom´Bhergis Monster Arena)
Rainforest Path (Includes the secret boss Helios)
Drakern Caverns (Includes Monster Arena material monsters)
Giant Woods (Includes a side-quest)
Ice Dominion (Includes the side-quest of obtaining Sword of God Wrath)
Amaril City district IV
Icecold Sewers south (includes the Legendary battles and The Undead #4)
Datatower East (Includes the secret battle with the Net-affected Wings)
Room of the Lawbook (In the room you can see the Book of Laws on Ameth, also includes a secret way to Sith gardens)

Sith Gardens (on the roofs) Includes the way to something secret..



Take a look at my trailer ! Just search for "Ameth I" on YouTube OR press the link in my spoiler in the beginning 

/Thanks for everyone who gave me the scripts that I could use them !

And thanks that I could show my game here...    

NEW : Other projects that I will do :



Ameth I Icludes :

Er... hi...
So where is the project?

How do I put pictures Here ?

I really hope this is a joke...

Upload them somewhere like Imageshack and use the code they give you. Easy as that.

Mate, this really is no where near enough info for this forum. Infact, you actually need information. You can't just post one screenshot. You need storyline, characters and that lot. Please read the rules.

I`m writing have begun RIGHT NOW !!!

there will come more, please wait !!!

RPGS don't ever let me get mad at you again!
Don't double post!
BTW,
your game is...
lolworthy

Ok    :)   

Bump.Why doesn`t anyone want to see my project ?

Please only bump your topic if there is new content. ~Wyatt

The reason im not seeing your project is that I don't think you are taking this seriously

I am..Just look now on my project... plz, I`ve done more now :)

Mister, you have failed me, I'm not going to start a flame war so....
I won't tell you :P

Another thing. Why the hell would you post the scripts you used in your topic? I mean not just credits, the whole script?

what`s the problem...Gosh !! :(

lmfao, the entire script! Hahahaha! Just made my day!

No, I wanted to say wich script I used and show what it was so people who searched (s) it doesn`t need to search any  more... Like a quick finding...

(your pikachu is cute  )

Plz I would really like to discuss my game 

Okay, Optikum's sprite has a random line of pixels on the bottom, and Zarx's sprite... wtf there's just a jumble in the bottom right, what's with that?

Your title screen looks like crap.  I'm not saying you need to buy Photoshop like I just did, but download Paint.NET or The Gimp.

You should also try and keep graphical constistency.  There's a few images you used that simply do not flow, and they really, just, bug the freakin' crap out of me TBH.

Use a link to thinks, don't just say to search for them somewhere.  And with that script...link to it.

Hi guys, troll much? Why don't we give him specific feedback instead of making fun of him. Yeah, I like that idea better.


RPGS, here is some feedback you should consider to help you make your game better:

First of all, it's hard to see your trailer (Ok, this isn't really to help make the game better) I would suggest you invest in a screen recording software like FRAPS or Growler Guncam rather than taking a video of your monitor with a webcam.

I would also recommend that you post more of your story. Right now, it looks like a million other games that have been posted here. Why don't you give us some more information about what happens in the game.

You should also check for graphical irregularities, such as what pixeL said, the random line at the bottom of Optikum's sprite.

When you are posting to credit which scripts you used, you generally just need to give the script name and the name of the person who made it. If you want, you can also give a link to where you got the script.

If you do those few things so that we can see more info about your game, we can give you better feedback.

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Oh god oh god oh god vastly inconsistent graphics get them away from me aah aah aah

The story reads to me as incredibly clichéd and nonsensical. If I had more time and was in a better state of mind, I'd gladly give you an indepth critique, but as is, it's too much and I'd probably go insane.

but basically:
1) graphics are horribly inconsistent
2) story is poor, at best

hey killerzkings how about you stop shitting up the board thanks

Exactly...However, when I putted my character sprites here, I needed to resize them, and that`s why they looks like they does, srry...

And my story is never poor...Let me write the whole and you`ll see it`s rather special...
And why is it hard to see my trailer ? i`m just wondering... Ok, so I need some feedback, would be nice :)

(Ps.Why Zarx looks like that is because the datadarkness inflicts things like that on the caster or nearby people)

"the pot calls the kettle black"
No seriously, dont start flame wars about personal hate n' stuff

On topic:

Your game has potential if you Pratice more
I like your dedication though.
Just, don't go off topic RPGS on topics and dont act like a noob in the forums
Sorry if it sounds rude.

Dont you ever try to use the Magical Crystals and COLLECTING THEM.

It has been seen in 101 RPGs ( no im just exaggarating w/e you spell that )

Ok sorry for everything :/
Far to late to change that I use crystals, sorry... And because people told me to write more of the story, I have done that now :)
I know my maps and graphic isn`t that good, perhaps ? :)

However theres really a lot of sidequests in Ameth I and many optional bosses 
Is there any webpage that I can upload my exe.file of Ameth I so people can DOWNLOAD my game  ?

megaupload, filefront ( uh I can't download there ), rapidshare, mediafire, and more

BTW, I am not going to play a crystal game unless people say its VERY NICE

You cannot say that a game is bad because it has crystals in it.. BTW it is formed as crystals and named as crystals, but they are apparently spheres...
Would it be better :/ ?

For the first screenshot: Find a better sky panorama and try to embed the land parts in the sky better. It's not really giving me a "oh wow this is a floating world" feeling, but rather "huh what the hell there's land randomly put in the sky".

For the second screenshot: There's too much emptyness, all the plain white even hurts my eyes. Fill it up more, and remove that line of shadow on the houses. It looks really weird.

Of course it won't be bad because of crystals.
But It will be clichy, therefore turning out some people

Ok , & I will put more of my screenshots, and that snow town IS just empty, I will post more screenshots in the first section (beginning) 



LATER : Take a look now :) I have added more screenshots 



Later : Ok, so where the hell is everybody ?