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    moog
  Mon Dec 14, 2009 5:58 am
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Ok, guys, basically its as the thread states. Dump any track youre working on or have finished a while ago. No full album, soundtracks, or workshop threads (threads asking for critique on your music), full topic that shit, ok? :p

It can be anything, a recording, a song youre working on, a small wip, or a full orchestral tune, etc. Basic criticism can be applied here but a "hey that sounds awesome!" kind of thing works great too.

Also this isnt a LOL DICK SHOWING contest, so just chill and post your dump's :smoke:

ill start, i wrote this for love's game a while ago but it got cancelled so DOOP:
http://www.zshare.net/download/69869352f7cea1d8/

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    bacon
  Mon Dec 14, 2009 6:42 am
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Moog: Your link isnt working for me, therefore I can't hear your song. ):

I made this a couple of weeks ago. I only used the DSK Asian Dreams VST to make this as well. Its quite short and really doesn't evolve. The other thing that might be problematic is the fact that its too "ending" in the beginning. Its more of a lullaby or something along those lines. I think the Sitar is too sharp, but whatevs. o:

http://bb.ohsk.net/uploads/Luan%20Tune%202.mp3


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    moog
  Mon Dec 14, 2009 7:22 am
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thanks bacon, i wasnt aware! i edited it with a new link

i like the song, it reminds me of something from wild arms :o the vst sounds very ripped from the softsynth vst though, i think that might be where dsk got it from :o

i need more oriental music's T_T


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    Toams
  Thu Dec 17, 2009 9:19 pm
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moog that song of yours has been on repeat now for like half an hour
it's probably due to the fact that windows media player is in a separate window, and i can't be assed to turn if off
though it's quite good.. maybe if you make it slower, and give the bells more reverb, it could be even more epic.

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    moog
  Thu Dec 17, 2009 9:28 pm
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moog that song of yours has been on repeat now for like half an hour


:)

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it's probably due to the fact that windows media player is in a separate window, and i can't be assed to turn if off


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    Toams
  Thu Dec 17, 2009 9:49 pm
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Samot wrote:
though it's quite good.. maybe if you make it slower, and give the bells more reverb, it could be even more epic.


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    Toams
  Thu Dec 17, 2009 11:52 pm
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i was just trying out that site in the thread firgof made, and some chords were played
which made me ramble on my keyboard.. and i decided to record them, so i could do something with it later
anyway, here's the result.. nothing impressive though, couple of false notes too
http://bb.ohsk.net/uploads/piano%20rambling.mp3

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    moog
  Sun Dec 27, 2009 9:30 pm
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that sounds cool as shit though, the 2nds make a cool chord progression, like something from ffix

lol at the abrupt ending


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    Toams
  Sun Dec 27, 2009 10:43 pm
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yeah, a pal of mine actually made an account on this forum, but he didnt post
he made this though: http://bb.ohsk.net/uploads/test2.mp3
too bad his settings were fucked up, so there's an overkill of distortion
the chords and overall progression are really something though
it could've been perfect~

i like it bad

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    So fist
  Mon Jan 04, 2010 3:40 am
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Here's a tune i've been kicking around for a while but can't really figure out what to do with.

http://www.hbgames.org/user_files//snippet1.wav

The best I could come up with was to make this phrase to come after it, but i'm not really happy with it.

http://www.hbgames.org/user_files//snippet2.wav


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    moog
  Mon Jan 04, 2010 7:46 am
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we talked about this on irc but i like the progression alot! the inner chords on the second wav sounded muddy but it was cause they were so similar to the originals

also http://bb.ohsk.net/uploads/sophfaggt.mp3 what i made from messing with yours (you already saw this too)

the end tempo is gay but it cant be helped atm


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    moog
  Tue Jan 12, 2010 11:36 pm
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Tomas wrote:
yeah, a pal of mine actually made an account on this forum, but he didnt post
he made this though: http://bb.ohsk.net/uploads/test2.mp3
too bad his settings were fucked up, so there's an overkill of distortion
the chords and overall progression are really something though
it could've been perfect~

i like it bad


yeah the velocity is BALLS HIGH but man this shit is ace.


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    .vawx
  Sun Jan 17, 2010 11:55 pm
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Tomas wrote:
yeah, a pal of mine actually made an account on this forum, but he didnt post
he made this though: http://bb.ohsk.net/uploads/test2.mp3
too bad his settings were fucked up, so there's an overkill of distortion
the chords and overall progression are really something though
it could've been perfect~

i like it bad


yeah the velocity is BALLS HIGH but man this shit is ace.


Fruity loops didn't want to use sustain so i had to record using stereo mix... not good XD

Did another random impro just now: http://rvdborn.com/music/impro2.mp3

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    bacon
  Mon Feb 08, 2010 6:50 am
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http://bb.ohsk.net/uploads/what%20is%20 ... nsense.mp3

Its nothing huge or anything, just a little melody.


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    Toams
  Mon Feb 08, 2010 8:59 am
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ahaha that's cool
i like how the first bit kindof mesmerized me
when the drums kicked in it was sortof a good movie tune all of a sudden
also what program are you using?
do i recognize the standard fl sounds? ;)

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    bacon
  Mon Feb 08, 2010 2:45 pm
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yes D:
I still need to get some drums, Ive just been too lazy to do so. :D


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    Toams
  Mon Feb 08, 2010 6:51 pm
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Nah man just use the vintage drum set, and play some with reverb and filters..

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    seven
  Sun Aug 08, 2010 9:37 pm
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http://webgel.net/bb/files/Balrog%20Story.mp3

For the sake of learning new music software I basically just took some cave story midis and tried my hand at remixing them. It's not great, but imo for a remix it came out okay. Also when it exported it came out BALLS LOUD so turn down your volume a little beforehand. :o


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    Admiral David
  Tue Aug 10, 2010 5:23 pm
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youtubed for easy playback, my 2nd rock track produced in FL.


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    rieo
  Tue Aug 10, 2010 8:44 pm
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seven that sounded very cool :) very epic

i am working on this as the battle them to my game face of a loaf
http://midishrine.com/midi/36882.mid

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    moog
  Wed Aug 11, 2010 12:12 am
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sounds waaaaaaaaaaaaay too hectic tone down the randominity and make something with a standard melody first

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    Admiral David
  Wed Aug 11, 2010 11:03 am
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new guitar track up, check it out !


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    moog
  Wed Aug 11, 2010 6:21 pm
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Admiral David youre missing the point of this thread; its not LOL OST DUMP its music you're working on or just starting, something you just made as a WIP; something like that. You cant use this for advertising, youve been doing that in two of your other threads man :o


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    Admiral David
  Wed Aug 11, 2010 8:11 pm
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Admiral David youre missing the point of this thread; its not LOL OST DUMP its music you're working on or just starting, something you just made as a WIP; something like that. You cant use this for advertising, youve been doing that in two of your other threads man :o


advertising? dude the thread says MUSIC >>>>and<<<< WIP. music is music. if you're a true musician you'd appreciate that. instead of intentionally trying to find a reason to be hissy lets just make music :thumb:

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    moog
  Wed Aug 11, 2010 8:43 pm
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its not that its the fact that youve dumped it every where :(

im not mad or anything i was just throwing it out there


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    Admiral David
  Wed Aug 11, 2010 10:39 pm
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ok u won this one lol i'll limit it to music thread from now on :

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    moog
  Tue Aug 17, 2010 2:58 am
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http://bb.ohsk.net/uploads/piano.mid

just got my new midi board d:o a yamaha clavinova, cost an assload but i didnt pay for it heh

but yeah i did some recording with two layer piano midi, i was just messing around in F minor but i think the melody turned out pretty good so might continue with it. tips? crits?


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    Rliv
  Sun Oct 03, 2010 6:43 pm
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Honestly Moog. I've found nothing you should work on with it, but perhaps expanding it more heh. I may pick up on something, but so far it sounds really good.

This is a work in progress tune, sounds like it'd be done, but no the main course needs tweaking I think.

Base of Disorder
http://www.esnips.com/doc/53ec8297-8b4e ... f-Disorder


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    Toams
  Sun Oct 03, 2010 6:53 pm
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wow

that could have been awesome.

however.

the lead is all random.

i mean, if you fix that to be more uplifting,
and a legato melody that compliments the bassline,
and the arpeggio's in the background,
then it could be something cooler

i've been working on two small intermezzo things lately
i can't decide whether or not they're good

so here goes:

http://tomasknipscheer.nl/stuff/Tomas%20-%20Tetr.mp3
http://tomasknipscheer.nl/stuff/Tomas%20-%20Tetr%20(op.%20II).mp3

and this random thing:

http://tomasknipscheer.nl/stuff/Vial.mp3 (including annyoing violin)

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    Rliv
  Sun Oct 03, 2010 7:01 pm
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however.

the lead is all random.

i mean, if you fix that to be more uplifting,
and a legato melody that compliments the bassline,
and the arpeggio's in the background,
then it could be something cooler


Awesome thanks a lot, yeah I was feeling it was getting a bit out of hand myself lol I tend to go a bit everywhere in my music at times, but by uplifting, and legato? What did you mean? I'm still getting into music here and there so I'm not as versed as I should be heh.

Btw I liked how the last one you made was coming out heh violin doesn't sound that bad, fits really heh. And the 2nd link isn't working.

Edit: Wait I think I got it, heh thanks again, I'll keep you guys in the loop with it. Yeah needs way more uplifting and fixing up with the course more, slows down and I feel it should keep a steady flow. I'll work at that bassline as well, having something go around with it more.

Also the 2nd tune I feel the little part that comes in with the cellos I think, sound a little sketchy, maybe it's volume? I don't know, but it's coming out pretty good. Kind of a sad melody it sounds.


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