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    Toams
  Sat Dec 11, 2010 12:54 am
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here's a small sample of a new thing im making
won't call it a song, but it definetly has me going

http://tomasknipscheer.nl/stuff/TRACK.mp3

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    moog
  Fri Dec 31, 2010 1:09 am
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http://bb.ohsk.net/uploads/Battery%20Powered.mp3

enjoy


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    Shizu
  Mon Feb 07, 2011 6:20 pm
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mooglin wrote:
http://bb.ohsk.net/uploads/Battery%20Powered.mp3

enjoy


This can turn into something REALLY good.


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    moog
  Tue Feb 08, 2011 8:51 pm
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Thanks! Im still messing with it a bit more, it was just something that I was doing with my new midi keyboard.


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    moog
  Wed Feb 09, 2011 3:12 am
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update

http://bb.ohsk.net/uploads/BatteryPowered.mp3


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    Shizu
  Sat Feb 12, 2011 1:27 am
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notably between 0:36-1:00 will be perfect with a bass line to fill in between the kicks. 0:18~ is catchy. I gotta love 5/4 :}


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    Toams
  Sat Feb 12, 2011 5:30 pm
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hey man you're getting better at this!
i like the flow of this, and i think some more glitchy sounds would improve the chip-ness of it

i've been working on this:

http://tomasknipscheer.nl/stuff/muzak/Tomas%20-%20HUR%20(Heads-Up-Rabbit).mp3

its an err.. electronic piece, pretty hard.
and i can't be bothered to lengthen the climax or make the rest of the song.
im not sure what to do next, so some advice?

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    moog
  Sat Feb 12, 2011 6:57 pm
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thanks alot both of you! i appreciate the comments. shizu, i will look into making a bass line :D

tomas this is dope so far. I like the percussive melody and the gradual crescendo with the fat synth sound! the bass progression is really nice too. sounds like something I would hear in an fps or on a title screen of a game. I think the volume issue is a bit of a problem sometimes, you build up the sound and then it sounds a bit to cluttered like at 2:00- 2:15. Besides that, I think its pretty well balanced and is turning into a really dope track man!


i hate to dump something else but i need some input on this too, its another WIP im doing for an OST:
http://bb.ohsk.net/uploads/Snow%20Globe.mp3


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    Toams
  Sat Feb 12, 2011 7:59 pm
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is that something i've heard before? it sounds familiar..
btw by glichy sounds i meant hats, chip hats.

anyway, at the moment its the same thing repeated twice, right?
it's one pattern repeated twice, and it loops.
i suggest you make the looping part three pieces long.
i say the first part you keep that way, that's a very solid base. for the second part you add in another instrument, maybe like a bass again. keep it airy and fresh though, its a very light song.

for the third part, before the loop ends, i suggest you revert to those three melodies you had at the beginning, and make them staccato, so it feels a little bit fragile, (i think i heard you talking putting this over an ice level sometime so walking on ice is feels very fragile too (not my best english but deal with it))

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    theGoldenMoon
  Sun Apr 24, 2011 10:28 am
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Alrighty, here goes. First time very composing :biggrin: Just downloaded Muse Score. This incredibly short (and ear hurting) track was me trying to figure out how to use it. I did learn how to read a violas clef though. To be honest I prefer to improv on a piano but seeing as my keyboards broken that won't be happening. It's incredibly choppy (was trying to figure out how to add pedal). Enjoy

http://bb.ohsk.net/uploads/Remeniscent%20Dream.midi.mid

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    Toams
  Thu Jul 14, 2011 4:59 pm
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I was working on this: http://tomasknipscheer.nl/stuff/muzak/T ... rf-%20(wip).mp3
Opinions? Suggestions?

I want it to be a typical electro house song, but I'm afraid my style won't let me.
I never end up with clean sounds.

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    aphadeon
  Wed Jan 23, 2013 2:51 pm
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Here's one I'm working on now. It's quite a contrast from my "style", but I wanted to try something darker.
I know the transitions are rough, it's still just a "demo" at this point. But I'd like some feedback.

http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?a47v32f3q8jcxw1

Main focus this far has been fine-tuning the sounds themselves. The melody's suffered a bit for it, but tone is coming along nicely. Still doesn't quite round out the spectrum though :( Not sure what to do with it.


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