thanks alot both of you! i appreciate the comments. shizu, i will look into making a bass line :D
tomas this is dope so far. I like the percussive melody and the gradual crescendo with the fat synth sound! the bass progression is really nice too. sounds like something I would hear in an fps or on a title screen of a game. I think the volume issue is a bit of a problem sometimes, you build up the sound and then it sounds a bit to cluttered like at 2:00- 2:15. Besides that, I think its pretty well balanced and is turning into a really dope track man!
i hate to dump something else but i need some input on this too, its another WIP im doing for an OST:http://bb.ohsk.net/uploads/Snow%20Globe.mp3