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What is the best thing with this project ?
The Story 20%  20%  [ 1 ]
The Maps 0%  0%  [ 0 ]
The Characters 0%  0%  [ 0 ]
The Names 0%  0%  [ 0 ]
The Music 0%  0%  [ 0 ]
The Size (8 hours gameplay) 20%  20%  [ 1 ]
Influens to other games 40%  40%  [ 2 ]
Sidequests 0%  0%  [ 0 ]
The Titlescreen 20%  20%  [ 1 ]
Total votes : 5
Twin Matrix
  Fri Jan 30, 2009 8:22 am
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Btw the game's installation doesn't even work and crashes at the last %.


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Balian
  Fri Jan 30, 2009 8:49 am
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Ohh the pain this thread gives me to read! I like how deticated you are to this project kid, never give up, but it seems like you REALLY need help presenting it.

First off, the thread itself sucks, no offence. Make use of BBCode and color in the post. Another thing, please use paragraphs... I cannot stress that enough. A little more information on your characters would be nice. Age, Class, Bio, etc. I see no need in listing the places you can go during the game. I'd rather find them myself, thats just part of an RPG.

You really shoulden't be concerned about other Ameth projects untill the first game is finished fully and has a storyline worth backing them up.

Like many others have said, you're mapping is atrocious. Add some more trees and other objects. Make you're game come alive kid!

I kinda like the storyline for this game, you just need to present it all better. I'm not trying to be mean or anything, ask help if you need it. I might be able to help you spruce the thread up to attract more people if you want, just P.M me. ;)

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RPGS
  Fri Jan 30, 2009 9:43 am
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EXACTLY !!! I have to start SOMEWHERE, so do not say its bad it is my 1st RPG !!!

1st RPG !!!
The first RPG May have bad graphics,
Bt Enough, You all have picked on me, I just wanna show my game here, it is a game, some people may be bad making ém and someone may be very good :) It is just so

bt ofcourse, I will fix the maps and stuff, but in Ameth I (1.2) Then :/ Anyhow

PLEASE I AM NO KID

RPG Come alive ? Ohh man you doesn´t know how long I have worked with the project for now, a halph year ya There is a DEEP storyline


Sorry for the abve, but I need people to not be TOO "Mean"...

However thank you very much, I will change the topic info and rw-write the story, (even if it is that advanced)

I think I need to PM you if it is ok :)


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RPGS
  Fri Jan 30, 2009 10:05 am
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UPDATE: I have shortened the storyline and added class and age of each character, Now Im will test downloading Ameth I, if it doesn´t work, it´s something wrong with the site srry :)

LATER :
Yes, It works to download !!!


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  Fri Jan 30, 2009 11:29 am
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I thought your thread said it was your 2nd RPG? :crazy:

Anyway. I have downloaded it. And every time I unpack it I get an error. And when I look at the contents its 138 MB's of BGM. Which totally blows my mind

I even spent 20 minutes downloading it again just to be sure there wasn't some mistake with Filefront. (Which there never is, I never had a problem with it)

And after spending the precious time of downloading the file. I unpacked the file once again to find 138 mega bytes of oh my fucking god

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After some much needed thought. I've come to this final conclusion. Of all the things people hated about your project, it totally had no affect on me. Until the 138 MEGA BYTE download of omfg background music. This is when I snap. Dude.. SERIOUSLY

Before ever uploading another thing like that again. Either reduce the filesize of all your songs with a choice converter or don't put them in there at all. If you bgm is 138. I fear to see what the whole thing is. Probably like 200 mb's. I'm going to shit brix now. kthx bai

First of all 4chan memes are against the rules. Secondly you need to calm down and stop flaming, relax, if there are problems just kindly let them know and they will fix it as soon as they can.

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RPGS
  Fri Jan 30, 2009 12:16 pm
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Enough, didn´t I already said that you shouldn´t waste your time on writing tings like " Oh thats way to much seriously dude"...Why do you write it anyhow ?

However there´s a great eror at filefront cause I can extract the file on my computer ! (When I have the file directly from my computer and NOT from Filefront)

It doesn´t matter how big something is, and all the BGMs is in use, I told you my game is 8 hours of gameplay, so ofcourse there may be much BGM and stuff...

I knew this would happen, is it even possible to upload my game somewhere where it acctually works !?!?! Im sceptic
I will try Mega Upload, bt I cannot see any "Download Button" When I try to download others projects :(

I told you that the game is LARGE :


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Dalton
  Fri Jan 30, 2009 12:36 pm
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There is a difference between large and too large. and 138 MB of music is too large for a game like yours.

And people write this because they want you to know. If all we did was come here and tell you how great your game is (which it isn't from what I can see) how would you improve?
At the moment there is so much wrong with your project, that people only comment the bad things, because the good aspects are overshadowed.

Lastly: If you can't take critizism, don't post projects here, because people here love to critisize.


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RPGS
  Fri Jan 30, 2009 12:45 pm
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I can take critique but people do not need to post meany things like "You must be 8 years old" THATS what I mean :)

However, I think I need help If I should like "reduce the size of BGM" Cause I need them all, BUT I can somehow make it so that it is a comrimated file (I think) , but I will need help , would you help me, else, I would NEVER be able to show the "world" my project ! It seems that it matters how big :( Cause It takes to long to download, How shall I do ? :crazy:


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Davey
  Fri Jan 30, 2009 1:43 pm
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You can convert the soundtracks to .ogg :cheers:

Reduces the size of your soundtracks really a lot. (like, more than 30%)

Some more tips on compressing rmxp projects...

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RPGS
  Fri Jan 30, 2009 2:19 pm
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Thank you so much ! I will do it ! But the worst thing is that the game is at my dad´s home, so I will have to wait about an week b4 I can fix it, sorry :(

I only have the encryptrd archive (the one that didn´t work)


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friend
  Fri Jan 30, 2009 3:21 pm
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You said this is your 1st project, but in the title it says 2nd project.

Welcome to RMXP.org, Mr. Contradictorer.

And your game is at Dad's home...
...
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*thinks of something nasty* :shock:


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RPGS
  Fri Jan 30, 2009 4:37 pm
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Im sorry it is my 2nd project, as I said wrong !

Yes It is at my dads, sorry, maybe I ´ll phone him to bring it to me

Yes,


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Toshi
  Fri Jan 30, 2009 5:36 pm
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Sry dude, but watch your doubleposting.
And u really really really need photoshop oder gimp or something like that...


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RPGS
  Fri Jan 30, 2009 6:44 pm
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Exactly, listen to the global Moderator, I think all of you flamed this topic (and me) by writing unnecessary things like "You´re 8 years old"

Banned if you continue doing such thing , listern to The Moderator


However, I will tell dad to come at Monday with the game
then I will fulfill some updates to it :

Map Addons
Qiuck De-Bug Test

and

Music (BGM) Reducing (To OGG eventually)


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MukanshinBlack
  Fri Jan 30, 2009 8:12 pm
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RPGS wrote:
I will tell dad to come at Monday with the game
then I will fulfill some updates to it :

What does this mean?

RPGS wrote:
Music (BGM) Reducing (To OGG eventually)


You shouldn't just reduce all your music, but remove what isn't really needed. Even reduced, you'll still have over 70 MBs on your project.

Also, to you people "defending" RPGS and RPGS himself, you gotta learn that when the game is/looks good people will say "it looks good" and when it is/looks bad they will say "it looks bad". And if you don't want people to think you're 8, check your spelling and grammar. This is an english-speaking forum, after all.

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Nickster
  Sat Jan 31, 2009 7:18 am
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MukanshinBlack wrote:
RPGS wrote:
I will tell dad to come at Monday with the game
then I will fulfill some updates to it :

What does this mean?

A "dad" is an informal version of father, ie. a parent of a child.

From what he said, i assume, based on loose evidence, that he requires his paternal figure to provide him with the game data so he may edit it.


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friend
  Sat Jan 31, 2009 8:56 am
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Nickster wrote:
MukanshinBlack wrote:
RPGS wrote:
I will tell dad to come at Monday with the game
then I will fulfill some updates to it :

What does this mean?

A "dad" is an informal version of father, ie. a parent of a child.

From what he said, i assume, based on loose evidence, that he requires his paternal figure to provide him with the game data so he may edit it.


The bold: I guess he knows that....

The Italicalized text: It would be easier if you use easier english.

To sum it up...

We shouldn't call him a 8 year-old boy, but instead tell him to check his G.R.A.M.M.A.R.


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RPGS
  Sat Jan 31, 2009 11:43 am
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Nickster wrote:
MukanshinBlack wrote:
RPGS wrote:
I will tell dad to come at Monday with the game
then I will fulfill some updates to it :

What does this mean?

A "dad" is an informal version of father, ie. a parent of a child.

From what he said, i assume, based on loose evidence, that he requires his paternal figure to provide him with the game data so he may edit it.


It is not my dad who decides over my project , why do you think so (Haa-haa ridicolous, don´t you have a dad ?)

Why dont you ask why I spell badly insthead ? i´m not 8 years old, but from SWEDEn,

It is rude to I say things that isn´t true :X
I have Ameth I at my mum´s place as well, but it is the first version of it so there are no uptades meaning that the
mapping is even worse :( Also there would be bugs, so therefore please wait until monday (or longer, cause I need to
reduce the size of everything, as I do not know how to do)

BUT, I will upload my Ameth I Demo ! You can play that at Monday evening, play trough the 20 minuites demo and see if you want to play the full version of the game then ! Give evrything you find a try please :)

Also, you meet Nova Angel much earlier in the demo


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Nickster
  Sat Jan 31, 2009 9:54 pm
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RPGS wrote:
Nickster wrote:
MukanshinBlack wrote:
What does this mean?

A "dad" is an informal version of father, ie. a parent of a child.

From what he said, i assume, based on loose evidence, that he requires his paternal figure to provide him with the game data so he may edit it.


It is not my dad who decides over my project , why do you think so (Haa-haa ridicolous, don´t you have a dad ?)
because thats what you said. if you need your father to bring you the game data, that means he does have some amount of control over it. what if he doesnt want to bring it to you?

and why are you trying to argue with me? i was just clearing up what you said so other people could understand it.

and no, i dont have a dad. thank you for assuming i did though.


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RPGS
  Sun Feb 01, 2009 1:10 pm
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Thank you Moderator :) Yes, don´t bother the grammar, it doesn´t matter, you CAN understand me

Ok I said I have THE GAME at my dad´s computer ! That´s all ! I have 2 homes you can say and I worked on the project mostly only at dad´s place , so he doesn´t decide over it I will say clearly !

But what I posted for was to say that I have de-bug tested the Demo, it works fine ! Uploading it tommarow, Monday as I said :)


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Dalton
  Sun Feb 01, 2009 2:15 pm
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Good, I will play the demo and tell you what I think once it is up (could be later tomorrow though, because I have to go see the doctor again :huh: )
You might want to work on your first post though, since it kind of turns people from your project. Give it more detail (especially when it is about characters) and write it up in a style that will get people curious about your game.
In order to do so, you might first write it in your mothertounge and than translate into english from there. Makes coming up with what you want to say easier.

As your project stands right now, it is only a laughing matter for people, where it could be a decent project.

And on a side note: I guess Arbiter doesn't do this because he likes you or your project, but rather because people where trolling like crazy here, which is against the rules. It is nice of you to thank him nontheless.


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RPGS
  Sun Feb 01, 2009 7:14 pm
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Okay, Yes I will upgrade and add more info tho the intro. of my topic and write more about the project :)

You will like the demo, I assure you, bt please play the full version then, the story troughout the whole game is just amazing I think (It is quite special anyway :) I think you will like how the story goes on...

You will notice that you meet Nova Angel a bit eraly in the Demo, but don´t bother, In the full it is more in-depht and you´ll meet her later.

Yes, I know that the moderator isn´t extra kind to me or like my project, it is just sad that there is needed a Mod. to tell people to stop flaming the topic, but however, I didn´t take it that seriously :/


EDIT : Help !!! Somehow I cannot extract Ameth I Demo !!! ONLY Audio file comes while extracted, it wasn´t like this on extraxting Ameth I (but it didn´t work either, cause it is 128 MB :/)

Plz, help must it be a ENCHRYPTED archive or NOT ?


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RPGS
  Tue Feb 03, 2009 12:28 pm
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UPDATE: Ameth (Full Game) 1.0 is ready , but as i said I will have top wait for saturday something, it is at my dad´s place. I´m also going to the dentist, wish me good luck :(


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Dalton
  Tue Feb 03, 2009 12:44 pm
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I don't quite understand...

Is it a full game or a demo? You talked about a demo all the time, but now you talk about a Full game...
And why do you have to wait to get to your dad's place again? Didn't he bring it over to you? How could you finish it then? :crazy:

Anyways, good luck at the dentist?


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RPGS
  Tue Feb 03, 2009 5:50 pm
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The first I wanted to Upload was a demo, but of wrong format, therefore I will now upload the full version , but in next week as said !

So the FULL GAME will come INSTHEAD :) My dad brought the wrong file (damn it), so i couldn´t upload it so you could actually PLAY it, wrong file !

When the game is comprimated as much as possible thouh :


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RPGS
  Thu Feb 05, 2009 8:50 pm
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UPDATE. I am now reducing the size of Ameth I (FULL) and will upload it latest at SUNDAY


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RPGS
  Fri Feb 06, 2009 6:55 pm
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UPDATE: Finnaly it is uploaded !!! It is in this link : http://files.filefront.com/Ameth+Iexe/;13221478;/fileinfo.html


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