File Size 102.26 MB (107,222,986 Bytes)

Come on RPGS... Make it smaller or you'll get very little downloads. This game isn't even worth a 50 MB download.

ohh, here I have wasted a day on lower the size /from 255 to 100 is great !) be happy that you evn CAN play it, dont bother the size, it works downloading now :/

We don't have to be happy that we can play your game. YOU can be happy that I bothered downloading it.
Going to check it out now. Expect my opinion later tomorrow...

Edit: Or you know what? Don't expect it. I've kind of had enough after the intro and the first map... The intro with the pictures is friggin hard to read. Did you slam the text on there with paint or what? It even looks bad if it was with paint.

I am not perfect at speaking and writing english in any way, but your grammar and spelling is just horrible. I have to guess at some parts.

And I don't have a clue what is going on in this first scene. And not in a good way, it doesn't feel like a plot point I have to come across later to understand. It feels like you just didn't explain it all that well.

And this first "map" just finished me off. What was that supposed to be? And how the hell was I supposed to know where this frigging portal is?

To make a long story short: I don't see why I should put effort into playing and reviewing a game, the creator did not put enough effort in to make it at least half understandable.
My advice: Get yourself a beta-reader. Maybe than I can get what is going on.

The screenshots look like a REALLY bad trip.

Ive never had a trip THAT bad.

The issue with size is that many people still use slow internet with slow downloading and uploading speed, shocking I know. The more presentable you make it, the more people will think it's worth it.

Ohh maan !!! listen carefully dalton : I AM SWEDISH , I warned you about it ! And the pictures isn´t bad (I´ve done them myself) Search in the map ends for the portal 8may take 4 minuites) and if you´re wondering what it is for type of map, it is Maqabar Cyberspace ! (do you know what NETWORK is ?, it is a network, a dataworld ) And you jump into the story directly because it´s better that way, if you ever should give something a chance you should see it will be better (quite good) the only thing you need to do is to play at least 10 minuites, is it that hard ?

PS. In the beginning, I must admit I forgot to CORRECT MY WONG SPELLING (OMG, I´ve done as good as I could all over bt not in the beginning), please play it at least 10 minuites and you´ll see the spelling IS accepteble AND srry ifit takes to long finding the portal (OMG forgot to change the graphic of it, the map was deleted and I "didn´t have time" to change all graphic to what it was) Very sorry, but puzzles in the game isn´t like that later, also if it is, the portal have "GRAPHIC" so you can SEE it :x

Er... I found the portal, but you gave me no hint where it is. That is simply annoying.
Being Swedish is no excuse for such bad english. I am german and my english is not SO bad.

If you manage to scare away your audience with the problems right in the beginning, they will turn off the game and not play it again. They will not play again, if you tell then it gets better. SHOW me that it is worth playing this game.

Right now I am not at my own PC, so I can't give it another try. Maybe later, but I don't honestly see why I should. It seemed like you threw this intro together in abou 20 minutes. Gamemaking takes time, even with RMXP.

But whatever, you never admit that you did something wrong, but start ranting how it is not your fault. That way all critique is useless, since you seem not willing to change a thing.
Please try to improve instead of saying it is good the way it is.

I can fix it, but why don´t play it ? You dont´need playing more than 20 minuites, you´ll notice there is not bad nor good, BUT spelling is getting better (strange but it is the truth, so just try !!)

Why don´t you look at the trailer ? Or is it the worst thing you ever seen ? te

Also, you´re not wasting your time playing a game (even it´s lenght) in like 20 minuites even if it is REALLY BAD , cause everything must have a chance, that´s my last word, you doesn´t even need playing 1 DAY !

Fine than my last word is: I won't play a game that fails to explain what is going on, doesn't give me a clue where to go next (I know since i've tried to play it again...), is full of errors in spelling and grammar (and the author is just to lazy to fix that) and has terrible mapping.

I really wasted my time on this one....

Okay don´t play it ! You´ll miss a great adventure however, must you bother the mapping THAT much ?

Not really... But if everything is summed up it is plain horrible. I can deal with bad maps but not with bad everything.

Sry but it looks like your not really takeing to well to constructive critisizm. Spelling can be tollerable but it just seems a little lazy when you dont just take a quik trip to google to correct a few words. The story seems like every other 12 year old fantasy worl where some bad guys are looking to take over the world for some dumb unreasonable regret and in the end the Shiney LITTLE CRYSTALS FTW, ZOMG!!! Now we have to get to the poor mapping and the crappy recolored graphics, and most of all....the amzing RTP and crappy ripped graphics from other games that in no way fit into the games atmosphere. And the most horrible of all is probably the ugly "Costume" title screen which is actually just some dumb picture that you got from google image search from typing in Dragon to the search window and wrote the title of your game horribly over it and the resized everything just to fit RMXP.

OKEY!!! now that I have the flaming out of the way...Time for somthing helpfull.
You shouldnt use paranormas the way you do. Land doesnt float in the air magically (in most cases) without a bottom to it. You seem to have it so that they are walking on floating grass 0_0.
Go get Gimp or Paint.net or if you already have one of the two, learn to use them instead of using basic paint functions such as the pencil to draw text over top of dragons. when changing colors on a graphic, don't just change its hue, actually go in a change it by pixels. hope i helped...

You really shouldn't be lecturing on the importance of proper spelling. *coughhypocritecough*

If people don't think hes doing such a good job, why not just let the topic die? It makes much more sense than repeatedly telling him what he's done wrong. He's either going to try and fix it or not. Since he doesn't want to try to improve, just let the topic die instead of beating a dead horse.

Lol. Yes I did miss spell alot...But this is not MY game that i try to devote time to. I am not as careless with a project. I find it pointless to perfect my spelling when all im doing is putting some criticism. But yes you did catch me their for my spelling, one up to you.

Even if its a bad topic it doesnt help to just ignore him. He won't learn anything or gain experience from people ignoring him now will he?

Shoving shit down his throat that everyone else has said already doesn't exactly help him either. He's pretty much telling people hes not going to change it or try to fix it, so just drop it; you didn't even have any new criticism for him.

Okey I really will solve this, I´m sorry about mapping, the only thing I can do is to add more things to them

About my grammar, I will solve it and upload Ameth I (1.1) , but don´t expect it tio come very soon, this time I really will fix spelling as good as possible and it may take time :)

Also, I will try to point out what to do next in everywhere ! it´ll be good !

RPGS, ADDING THINGS to your maps WILL NOT make them any better. Visit the MAPPING IMPROVEMENT THREAD that Twin Matrix posted (I forgot on which page) and look at tutorials found here on .org and PRACTICE your mapping.

You've proven that your grammer and spelling needs work, and just double-checking it won't be enough. Try to find someone nice who can write better english then you and have HIM help you. Post in your thread asking for help or look towards real-life friends (if you have any).

TAKE YOUR TIME. GOOD GAMES take a long time to BECOME GOOD. Also remember you're making this game for US, your GAME-PLAYING PUBLIC, so HEAR what we have to say whether or not it offends you. Maybe even look into other games in Project Discussion and find out why people love those games and not this one.

TRY HARDER then you have been trying and be more OPEN to ANYTHING we have to say. We are mostly HELPING you not hurting you.

Anyways, good luck, kid. (I still think you're 8.)

I have a program who translate words to english AND correct sentences and words and grammar, so I have to use that, okey I´ll be more open,

That´s what I haven´t been (cause EXCEPT that I have TAKEN TIME : A HALPH YEAR doing the game)

I will take all tips and update the game, BUT only´ifpeople stop joking about my age, it wastes your time writing such things,

Please also report any bugs (I´ve tested it so I hope there is no bugs :/ )

PM me if there is any bugs or other thing I will CHANGE, but PM me if there is any sidequest or thin that is to "strange" / hard IF you´re playing it :)

Thanks !

I have yet to see a program that translates senteces correctly... There is nothing better for translating than someone who is fluent in both languages. I would help but I do not know swedish so you better look for someone who does.
And half a year is not really so much time for a game. There are projects in here that have been in developement for some years now. You have to take as much time as you need.
Nobody has said anything about your age for quite some time now... Why are you still blaming us for that?
So please improve a lot. I will give this game a second chance once you updated it.

Yes thank you , it is worth a 2nd chance, cause with good (CORRECT OMG !!) spelling and grammar the game is understandeble, but you will have to accept the maps as they are with a few more objects sorry,

and NO , I won´t look for anyone who talks Swedish (but my friend) Cause I think the translator maybe enough, but excpect the uopdated version to come in 1 or 2 month (if I MUST set a timelimit)

Do I need to make a new topic once I have UPDATED (Extraorinary !) the game, or will this not be lost ? :)

Why, o why, do I have to accept the maps as they are? It doesn't hurt to learn some basic mapping skills. It will make your game a whole lot less bad (that sounded strange).

Could you give me an example of what your translator produces? I want to make sure it is working correctly. In my experience those things are just producing crap.

Of course you don't have to set a timelimit. As I said: Take all the time you need.

And this topic will just do fine. Just inform us about an update and it is alright. (maybe you could change the topic title once it is updated...)

Allright :) BUT i cannot change the maps as I will lose the events and their position, isn´t that true ?

I will take tutos, but I not sure I will REDO the maps COMPLETLY :)
The Translator is not a crap thing, it is good, but is there any other good "Correction Programs" Out there ?

Would be good to use it,

Also I am redoing my graphic (to better resoulution, ehr)

The Topic will be named "Ameth I : Version 1.1 (BBT)"
Thank you !

You can make your maps better without completely fucking up your events and their positions, you know. If you happen to add a pillar somewhere and the event is supposed to walk in a straight line, then just add in a few extra steps to go around it. Or, you can copy and paste your maps into new slots, and yes there won't be events there, but your original map will still be saved (with the events you're so worried about) and you can rework the map without any problems.

The point is, if just about everyone who has posted about your game has complained about your maps, then maybe, just maybe, there is definitely something that seems off to them and you'd be better off actually listening to them.

And just as an experiment....

Precis som ett experiment, jag ska visa dig hur automatisk översättare misslyckas. Jag översätta detta med hjälp av Google Översätt. Bara om allt i denna tråd har haft engelska fel av boatload, men du ständigt ignorera dem till förmån för status i din bristfälliga översättare. Vad översättare är det egentligen? Ge oss ett namn. Dessutom får du hålla ignorera råd av människor som, ja, alla arbetar på sitt eget spel, och medan det ära i stående av din skapelse, men när alla klagar över din kartläggning och engelska, det är verkligen i ditt bästa intresse att på minst lyssna till dem. Allt du säger är "Men det är ett fantastiskt spel! Varför ska kartorna ett problem? Bara spela upp den, det är häftigt!" Och ändå har vi alla sagt, "The story behöver arbete, kartläggning behöver arbete, din engelska behöver arbete," et cetera et cetera. Din inte ger oss några incitament för att spela men du får FÖRGRYMMAD att ingen av oss vill spela det.

That is translated into Swedish very bad

:X But as I said okay I will update everything, I said it was good, but does that mean that I won´t work on it MORE ? I haven´t said that, but be prepeared to wait foer it then : It´ll take a while, and also Iwill dissapoint most of you by saying that I won´t ( WILL CHANGE MAPS) maps, I will change them better BUT not that they interrupt the events

0_o I have forgotten the name of the translator, but I will need a new better one and that´s why I haven´t used them !


I WILL ,I WILL

Hi, I've moved this to Completed Games since apparently this is finished? You don't need a Project Discussion thread AND a thread here. Please include any information which was in the thread I locked in this one. Thanks.

Ok thanks ! But I hope that this one is not locked (Is THIS moved to Completed Games) Okey very good !

I like the Title screen much better now. But i still dought its custom made so fill free to use my title background considering my story is still in develpment and i dont plan to get to the game itself for a while.



And yes, that is 100% custom made. if you need help with custom charsets, then i might be able to help. I'de rather help you than to give you advise that people ahve already given you.

I have noticed there is a bug im Sith Gardens, it is fixed now (6/2)

so you don´t get stuck in the gate

(UPDATE) The Network Tileset looks better now

No screenshot availible sorry

UPDATE (12/2). Relationship added to each characters, and all member of MaqaBar Faction, and The History of World Government. Added each Judge (I-XXXV) in House of Order to World Government history.

EDIT : UPDATE (18/2 - 09) : Secret ending written, soon I will make The Secret Ending in project and how to unlock.

BUMP

I would have hoped somebody whouls see it, I´m making a new topic where I post my Ameth I Upgrades