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Enjoy
  Fri Mar 18, 2011 3:03 pm
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Poetry by Enjoy



Hey there! It's me, with some poems for you! Feel free to post your interpretations on what you think they mean (especially the second one)



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Mired in the viscous undergrowth of morality,
Immobilized by the indeterminate; and left helpless to the vivid judgement of a colour-blind spectrum,
Taking slow, stubborn steps in a direction one can only assume is forward,
Losing hope's compass with every struggled step and breath.
I find myself between two places, unsure of the distance to either or,
Nor sure of the importance of either landmark.
How can I weigh my options when I am so unsure?



2
His movements are awkward, a desire to create something beautiful;
Like a painter without a steady wrist who, although meaning well, lack of skill overcomes
and the scene represented on canvas is a shadow of the vanity of other work,
however it has an incredible honesty to it, a certain characteristic that shouts,
"I am not the best, but I have done my best work."
And for this, we are grateful.




Last edited by Enjoy on Sun Mar 20, 2011 5:24 am, edited 6 times in total.

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Misery
  Fri Mar 18, 2011 5:33 pm
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:D Yay! i like poems and this was a good one

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Enjoy
  Fri Mar 18, 2011 8:56 pm
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Thanks!! <3


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Enjoy
  Sun Mar 20, 2011 5:13 am
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Another poem up, and reformatted the thread for ease of adding more later! Toodles!


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moog
  Sun Mar 20, 2011 5:20 am
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hey these are pretty cool. I really like the style of the 2nd one and the artistic imagery it gives off. post more!


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Misery
  Tue Mar 29, 2011 5:02 pm
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Yeah, these are really good i like 'em both :D

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