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- Project Critique Station -

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Due to the old Project Criticism Partnership losing interest and being difficult to maintain, I'm starting up a slightly different critiquing station based on suggestions from others.

Here's how it works. All you have to do is post in this topic asking for somebody else to look over your project and give you some critique, using the template below. The person giving you the critique can either have or not have a project - it doesn't matter. It's quite simple, really!

You can do critique swapping as well (giving critique to the person that gave you critique) - just specify in the template that you're willing to give a critique to somebody else. It's not absolutely required but it's polite and you get loads of appreciation points. (redeemable for Spondulicks and Boondollars)

So basically, just fill out the template, stick it in here, and other people will use the template to give you advice on your project.

This can only work if you guys are willing to give critique. So for the good of mankind, take a few minutes, stop posting in The Rec Room, and help out your fellow game developers! (you'll feel really warm and fuzzy inside if you do!)

Template:

Feel free to ask any questions and I'll clear things up. Hopefully we can get things off the ground here and get some hot, steamy critiquing action going

Does this work only on projects with Demo, or also with projects still in a bit earlier development. If it does, I'll give it a try.

Project Name: Greater Realms
Link to the Thread: Here It Is
Focus: Anything
Willing to critique another project: Yes

Project Name: Celestial Sphere
Link to the Thread: Here
Focus: Graphics, Clicheness and how to be original
Willing to critique another project: Yes

I took care of Star's request. :)

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Project Name: RELIC
Link to thread: viewtopic.php?f=78&t=71266
Focus: Any
Willing to Critique: YES

As long as you have enough material to make a proper thread in one of our forums, you can ask for critique. :)

Looks like we haven't got too many results so far. May be a consequence of forgetting to sticky a thread (dev!), but no matter.

If you're still interested, this thread is open! I'm sure there are tons of projects out there needing work. Even if your game is complete, you can offer a trade for reviews, maybe.

I added one more thing to the template, by the way: Criticism Strengths. You may want to tell future partners if you're a pixel genius or a script whiz, so they'll know you're perfect for the task.

Project Name:Surreality
Link to the thread:http://www.hbgames.org/forums/viewtopic.php?f=78&t=71818
Focus : Gameplay and Writing(Probably my biggest concern), but just general criticism would be enough.
Willing to critique another project?: It would be my pleasure.

Project Name: 27th Iteration
Link to the thread : viewtopic.php?f=23&t=72435
Focus: General Criticism
Willing to Critique another project: Absolutely

I know I'm not supposed to worry about necroposting in this thread but... but I do D:

Project Name: Necrofear
Link to the thread: viewtopic.php?f=78&t=73656
Focus (what you really need advice on): Gameplay, overall quality
Willing to critique another project?: Always
Criticism Strengths (what you're good at critiquing): Gameplay, funnily enough

Project Name: Secrets of Elemental
Link to the thread: viewtopic.php?f=78&t=73890
Focus (what you really need advice on): Concept
Willing to critique another project?: Of Course
Criticism Strengths (what you're good at critiquing): Maps and Visuals

My game is dreadfully conceptual right now, but I'd like to get lots of initial critique and eventually mapping critique too.

Project Name: Sx3 - Secret Soul Survivor
Link to the thread: viewtopic.php?f=78&t=76139
Focus: Scripts and Realisation of my Extracontent
Willing to critique another project?: Thats what im here for.
Criticism Strengths: Music, Functionality

GAME: Magnus Legend
GENRE: Fantasy RPG
ENGINE: RPG Maker XP
STATUS: Demo Release
ESTIMATED PLAY TIME: 2 - 3 Hours
HARD DISC SIZE: 256 MB

FOCUS: Game-play and Plots
WILLING TO CRITIQUE: Hell Yeah!

LINK TO THREAD:[/b] http://www.hbgames.org/forums/viewtopic.php?f=78&t=75837

Project Name: TREE SOUL KINGDOM
Link to the thread: viewtopic.php?p=731778#p731778
Focus (what you really need advice on): Battles, mapping, directions in game
Willing to critique another project?: Yes
Criticism Strengths (what you're good at critiquing): gameplay I guess:P

i forgot to put the link to my game here, im sorry. i will coment on all links that apeared before here now :)

Sx3- Secret Soul Survivor
viewtopic.php?f=78&t=76139

thats the fun thing about this section, where you write, that you will comment on any game in the list, but get no comment on yours c: