okay so i havent really drawn in like 2-3 months i think and ive gotten really terrible so i did some sketches to songs and once the song was over I had to move on and like these are really terrible :c
I don't think there's anything wrong with the hands... But the upper head seems to to be at a weird angle while the bottom one is more straight on... As far as proportioning goes I like it, and the pants seem really nice and clean.
This took me like an hour... The things that seem a bit off is the collar bone... and the blank space in the top left area... Still in the lineart stage... and I haven't bothered to even think of what colors to use...
I'm loving the improvements I'm seeing among various artists! I might not post that often (due to my laziness) but I'm always watching and seeing some inspiring stuff!
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WIP nothing is finalized yet. I'm going to hopefully enter this into Gameinformer. Seeing as how I'm trying to get more exposure as an artist. :p
Here's hoping I finish something!
Crits? Comments are always welcomed/wanted.
Shep looks fantastic. Amusingly, she looked very much like my own FemShep. Even though Shepards can vary, even if she weren't wearing her N7 gear, I think I'd be able to figure out who that was.
I figured out Miranda by her clothes (I think; she's the one on the right, right?), but it took me some time to understand that one of the girls was Ashley (even then, I'm assuming, because Ashley doesn't even really use pistols, does she? She's a Soldier type. I mean she technically CAN, but why).
Neither of the other girls' faces look a huge amount like Miranda's or Ashley's in-game faces. Actually the Ashley-face reminded me instantly of Liara's face.
- Miranda's in-game face is very round. The one you drew is quite angular, with a sharp chin. Her in-game lips ... The upper-lip is triangular, with a sharply-inclined cupid's bow. Her nose bridge is less curved; it's more straight. Here's a nice Mirandaface reproduction: http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2009/ ... ebbe88.jpg
- Ashley ... Her in-game eyebrows are rather thick, her lips rather fat and rounded. The cupid's bow is very slight and curvy. She wears heavy eyeliner. Your version has her with a deep widow's peak in her hair, but if you look at the screen I posted below, you'll see she doesn't even have a widow's peak at all. See: http://www.gameranx.com/img/12-Mar/ashl ... fect-3.jpg
Or ... Wait, maybe that's Kasumi. IDK, I never bought any of the DLC.
Anyway, it's looking nice, at any rate. Be careful with the size of FemShep's hands; they look quite small.
Should be pretty awesome when you're done :D
edit: The more I look at it ... The more I doubt that I have the right characters after all o_o. Is ... Is the one on the right Ashley? In Miranda's clothes? Hmm ... >_>
V: you're correct the order is as follows:(left to right) Miranda (who actually started out as Liara but somehow turned into Miranda), Femshep (because I hate manshep) and Ashley (who was originally going to be Tali, then Garrus :p) but yeah I was trying to get the faces somewhat similar to the ingame models but ashley has the weirdest shaped head. I'll have to upload the updated piece when I get home as I'm typing this from my phone currently and I'm art work. Nonetheless I appreciate the crits, as well as the reference photo! I couldn't find a good picture of just Mirandas face without it being some cosplay or porn image. :/
I could never get my Femshep to look good. :( she would look great in the character creation screen but then in game she was always a monster. I was trying too go for a more default sheppard look but as long as she can be recognized then all is good in the galaxy.
Strawberry: The only thing that really bothers me about it is that hand. Idk if its due to the angle that its portrayed at or how its not as smooth as the rest of the drawing but other than that I absolutely LOVE your designs! I must say if I get around to finishing something I would love to do my own interpretation of one of your characters. Also love the family piece! Very cute. :)
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There labeled and faces somewhat fixed. Still trying to get the Miranda to look proper. I'll probably make the eyes on Ashley more "sultry" but Idk Femshep is supposed to be the star of the show!
EDIT 4: Taking V's advice into mind I did a quick character swap just to see. Now that I'm looking at it I might switch Ashley out for Jack or Kasumi maybe Drell?
I don't know a lot about art just yet, but I just wanna say that Makasu, I absolutely love the way you draw faces. Things like drawing that little line for the edge of the tip of the nose do a lot for depth.
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Now that you gals mention it, it is a tad bit off balance! Garrus is out :p I really like him as a character though. So now the question remains; who should I draw there? Tali? Jack? Miranda again? Morton would probably work...
Mawk: why thank you! :) I originally got the noise thing from one of my favorite artists Ryan Ottley. As well as anime!
Nothing is final of course. Just playing around with ideas.
I'm guessing it'll have to be Mordin. Just because whilst I REALLY like Kasumi. I do want people to be able to identify with the picture. :p So Maybe I'll just make different versions and ultimately submit the one that looks the best.
I was going to color Kasumi like half cloaked and whatnot.