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    XVinh
  Thu Mar 22, 2007 2:07 pm
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I've been doing this for a fews months. Yes, I may be not as good as someone you know. Please tell me what do you think about these songs. It's not finished until I... finish it. I'm still a kid after all.
I'm still editing this post.
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I want to fly
music box
ancient
goodbye
Happy ever after
Haze
Lion's courage
Music box - arranged
Nostalgia
passed
sad
song of water Loopable
special battle
Strain of memories
Midi
All the files are there http://www.box.net/shared/mxjle6eksj


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    The Storyteller
  Thu Mar 22, 2007 8:46 pm
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These are alright. I like them.

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    urza220
  Thu Mar 22, 2007 10:10 pm
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I listened to a few of these, and they all sounded pretty good. However, they need to be filled in more, as they sound rather sparse. But a very good start.

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    XVinh
  Fri Mar 23, 2007 7:12 am
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Yeah, they are sparse because I only focus on the melodies (strains). Besides I'm not good enough to do it. Maybe a few more years. Thank you very much.


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    Granas3 REMIXED
  Fri Mar 23, 2007 4:58 pm
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Actually, these sound great. I haven't listened to them all, but the 9 or so i have all sound really good. Although, they could do with a few more layers.

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    XVinh
  Tue Mar 27, 2007 12:24 pm
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Thanks! I'll do it. Here's another song I just wrote. Fixed one time.


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    urza220
  Tue Mar 27, 2007 2:14 pm
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It's pretty nice, but I really think it would sound great filled out a little more. Just try something like taking those harp chords and making them a string ensemble, add a left had to the harp part, and add in a simple string bassline, it could even just be the root of every chord. Even something that simple could fill this song out and make it sound much fuller.

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    sirsk8aton
  Tue Mar 27, 2007 6:30 pm
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I listened to most of them, and I like "Seeds of Hope" the best. They're actually pretty good. Keep up the good work ^^

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    brainstorm
  Wed Mar 28, 2007 2:59 am
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They are really good. but snes format sound is very annoying.

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    Ryanna
  Wed Mar 28, 2007 3:05 am
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Location: The Sun
What do you use? I'm going to be a composser :P
And i love Haze! Do you mind if i put theese in my games? I love them :P
& of course i add credits

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    XVinh
  Wed Mar 28, 2007 2:29 pm
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No problem Ryanna. :) But in the future, I may use it. And, I'm using Encore 4.5. Band-in-a-box 12 for the accompaniment is good. What's your game?
Thank you urza220 for your suggestion.
sasuke89, I don't know. what is snes format sound? Can you explain?
Note: Fixed the sound problem of Recall.


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    Ryanna
  Wed Mar 28, 2007 8:40 pm
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Location: The Sun
My game is about a saving the world from a Dragon from the moon and plus you get to have a Love life :P XD and you start off with a poor home but you can upgrade it..and before you can marry you need to upgrade two times :) just like harvest moon..Without the harvest XD its title is: Blue Moon The Tale

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    sirsk8aton
  Fri Mar 30, 2007 2:48 am
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Hey, do you mind if I used Seeds of Hope? I think it's really nice and I will give credit, of course.

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    XVinh
  Fri Mar 30, 2007 12:23 pm
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That's OK. If you don't mind please PM me about your game before using it.


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    XVinh
  Tue Apr 03, 2007 7:53 am
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I'm quite busy these days. I won't be here for a while.


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    XVinh
  Sat Apr 21, 2007 3:34 pm
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Try these two. I just remade them.


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    Colormagix
  Sat Apr 21, 2007 6:46 pm
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Your music sounds nice, keep up the good work.

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    XVinh
  Wed Apr 25, 2007 2:11 pm
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Thanks. I need more suggestions. Everyone, please leave a comment!! :)


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    XVinh
  Fri Apr 27, 2007 5:13 pm
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Here's a new one.


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    XVinh
  Sat Apr 28, 2007 6:14 pm
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How about it?


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    urza220
  Sat Apr 28, 2007 10:50 pm
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This is a nice piece. I'm very happy to hear that you've filled this piece in instead of just having a melody and maybe a counter-melody. It sounds very good; try filling in some of the other pieces you posted here, and keep up the good work.

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    XVinh
  Mon Apr 30, 2007 12:04 am
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I walked in my garden. The wind blew lightly, inspired me a melody. It made me feel about home, about the past. We forgot something really important to us. And the feelings were like homesickness. They made you feel calm. This is pretty simple, but you can feel that feeling. The melody is not really good but it is attractive, right? It's even better if you listen to it in night.


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    XVinh
  Wed May 02, 2007 6:18 pm
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Thanks urza20 for saying that.


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    XVinh
  Thu May 17, 2007 5:20 am
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Another. It may be not a good one. But at least, it's fine.


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    Arithon
  Fri May 18, 2007 4:21 pm
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I quite like your midi's and thank you for producing them :)

If I ever get round to doing some more work on the game I am making I am definitly going to incorperate them into it.


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    XVinh
  Tue May 22, 2007 1:00 pm
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Thank you too. That really made me happy. So I make this:


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    Murcu
  Tue May 22, 2007 3:47 pm
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None of those worked for me :(

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    XVinh
  Tue May 22, 2007 5:58 pm
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Huh? What do you mean? You couldn't hear anything? Or they're too bad?


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    Murcu
  Tue May 22, 2007 8:15 pm
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I got them to work, hehe my bad!
I've only listened to one so far, but I'll give some more a listen.

Just listened to In the Sky... It's a nice feeling over all. The music box/bells sound make it sound very RPGish. Although there are LOADS of places that have notes that completely clash. Go through this and listen very carefully, and you'll hear them. Also, I don't like the way this song wraps up. It seems to be a departure from the way the rest of it is. Lastly- is that Tremolo strings I'm hearing? If so, I suggest changing that, as they give off a sort of dangerous feelings. If not, I'm retarded. :D

Listening to seeds of hope now. It's nice, though I think the notes at the beginning sound a bit muddled. You've taken this in a much more Eastern direction, and it shows. It sounds really really nice, especially with the short strings pulls in the background. The song stays very very nice until the end, but it doesn't allow for repeat. This means it essentially can't be used in an RPG. You need to make it a natural sounding flow from end to beginning, unless you want this to only be used in cut scenes.

I'll update this post with every next song I listen to with comments.

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    XVinh
  Wed May 23, 2007 6:15 am
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So the problems here are:
1. "In the sky" is not well made. The melodies seem separate from each other.
2. "Seeds of hope" is not repeatable.
OK. About the first problem, I remake it. Just want to let you know: I haven't finished it, and I forgot that. So I'll continue.
The second problem: This song is good as the way it is. If I make this repeatable, it may cause the opposite effect (become worse). Besides, it's the first song I made. So I want to keep the original version. It should be used for cut scene. And that's all I think. Only cut scene.


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